That was great! I liked the Back to the Future gag in there. One bugbear - please please please check your spelling / grammar in future. You guys spend so much time on all the other stuff, it's the tiniest things like the misspell of "cemetery" that lets the rest of the work down a little for me.
Huh. Never realised that's how it was spelt... Go fig...
Wow, this is stunning. You went for it with the lighting effects, right down to the reflection off of Slave 1 as it flies off. Loved it!
thank yeee :) was keen to make every scene as pretty as possible
This shows a lot of promise, though for me it fell flat with the sound. I dunno, the animation was great, but the production on the voice work and lack of any sound effects other than the gun firing and burning sound (if it was burning, or was it meant to be them swimming?) of the island as they left (as they're flapping about in water) left it feeling quite empty for me.
As a demo and pitching tool it works well, but if you're looking for things to improve or tweak for further releases I'd start with the sound - I think a little more effort with it would boost the overall flow of this significantly.
Thanks a ton man! Any advice helps, and I'll definitely work on the sound a lot more when the film is in full production!
This is one of those things that must happen all the time - unfinished work that never sees the light of day. Glad you managed to pull this together and get it published! :)
That was great! Missed an opportunity for a line like "Give him a grilling" though. :)
Haha yes! I need the cheesy one liners.
This is my second run through of this today. It's funnier the second time around.... There's just something about his face, especially when the music swells haha.
Thanks, man. I'm glad to hear you liked it!
I love how you've brought this to life. I have a hard time visualising lyrics, so this was perfect for me. I knew Formby's stuff was risque, but damn... he really was pretty tongue in cheek, particularly for his generation! It's nuts to think that that song is nearly 80 years old!
That was great! I had one slight problem with it though - there was a clicking noise throughout the animation. Not sure whether this was intentional, or whether something messed up during encode, but it was quite distracting in places.
Part of me wonders whether this might benefit from subtitles too (though if you're going to do that, PLEASE have someone proofread it all for you).
Anyway, really looking forward to seeing what you come up with next!
Hey man, thanks for the feedback!
The clicking was not intentional, I acutally had quite a few problems with the audio while producing this, I think its mainly from the encode. I thought about exporting the audio by itself and putting the two back together on some editing software. But couldn't figure out how to do it.
Next time, I'm gonna plan a little more carefully and have one of my friends edit the audio and make sure it's all squeaky clean! Thanks again!
That was so well thought out, loved every bit of it!
You ought to spend a bit more time developing these ideas and honing your skills. They're the start of something great - I enjoyed both this and Cloud Watchers. Looking forward to more from you, just take your time with the next one!
If you're stuck for plots etc, you might want to team up with other people
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